I'm going to agree with Music-Story here...
Very short and sweet, my friend. It gets the job done without nagging like an angry housewife. Very good orchestral tune.
The violin is fine where it is, in my opinion. The panning sets it off from the other instruments, and it should be louder since it is the melody.
Loving the rain stick. There needs to be more rain stick on the Audio Portal. The booming bass drum works well, too. Maybe up the reverb on it a bit. Just a bit, though.
In all, a really good orchestral track. If you ever write music for high school bands, let me know. :)
~Joshy676